【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# U5 t/ E1 S& @2 r5 u4 p  @3 `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 K, M. l- S3 X0 W+ K/ tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: a+ m/ E" N9 b. g8 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  ^$ q5 R3 n; n! zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ a7 ]; s7 Z7 l, d' v$ AEvery other word you utter is love
' o5 A( |# Q4 L. @! \6 Q. N5 v. HI really want to know just how much you love me
& X, P% _) j/ v7 y$ t7 ?3 g, t3 QI love you I love you with all my heart
9 r/ g" L, A4 [1 R) n" U- kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 y' f* ]+ \) e$ B. VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 H) q% s( Q9 t( J  {, BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) L8 s9 L1 _) t% ?/ v" m8 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 n& |0 u! ?7 ], R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" q) E, Q( l, q  |2 j+ C. Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* t* X' y$ ]" Y9 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; q' S2 Y" i! |* B, M8 D, ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 U2 Z! I1 _( A( T6 w+ m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ c6 p4 ?5 a( f7 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 c7 w" R2 r) k/ O( {2 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% X' I+ s9 |+ h- ~! z  R, ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 }  j! h! ~: d) K5 D, C/ S0 l& `<P>你无需担心</P>
8 ^% u: W8 e8 y3 V  I3 \# s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 M3 O6 }" |$ ]3 x% d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 I$ Y% N. Y6 M$ E) c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) s! z6 i* h9 C( d% [& G7 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 w) ^. E3 m8 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ g* L6 p+ H( p5 z9 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! i/ O" t" I% u4 `" G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 S' ?3 Y8 L6 p& E' y, y0 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 c! x# h: ?1 ]8 F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 _9 l9 j* V' ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! j6 F9 b; b0 W( S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: Q6 j6 J- o) Y' y4 M1 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) }4 `* E6 t8 p0 c" a<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 G0 s8 |/ @2 F3 A/ {. r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% M  r% M# ?. E  U2 N) Y4 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- Q! I4 D, B4 \" M% D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ d: g# L  Y3 V0 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' b3 q$ b9 o) h% |, i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( U+ a* ?& K, G/ b8 X6 P) Y3 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>