【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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, f% ~% t& o* Q( G我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 B2 x. d- [8 v$ L4 T+ R6 Z1 ~  I3 jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 l: U% w4 f+ ]% a: {I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% I' B( o9 m. ?1 O& f# w8 @/ qI would probably know how you feel
6 H$ c4 y. ]7 a7 m, _" t9 pLove… just the word love
  k% t* d" f) I/ J5 P- e) @Why is it so difficult to express?
2 K$ S2 C0 s3 w; KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 }6 ]- l# }  J; Q0 `3 HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* z1 `' |) P3 J1 h1 m) l2 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* z9 r+ h- I9 j  X1 D9 M' W  vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  o& y3 T# q! n3 {. E* K, D; [) wI want to confess that I love you,
! A" s! k& J1 e! ?" U: ?9 cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. {/ ]* t7 O  f1 z9 x# RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 [% p1 s7 ~. \) s! s; z* i3 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 _" `1 D* t* PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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# ]. |" }$ L! J9 M4 S1 r+ T( e<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% v' ?+ \6 _' b. h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ N) }0 t: _' H. X+ K5 u<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ u8 j9 a: g0 m! k4 n; C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) s* }. |( t" m  r/ i/ R3 ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ q7 Z: B  W0 W% Y7 z6 w0 a, N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 V- d. j4 L- ~0 n( k& x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 b) b  v" E& v" k7 K- g, h; k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% `, n6 h' m7 j2 C, x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& r( F# T8 E4 ?7 @8 A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ g* {2 I" f" n2 J) ^, [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' w7 D0 G9 d2 z" k, c<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& G: ]; W& S+ G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 K% `  j& A  }4 n+ j; o<P>但我不会</P>
% |+ ~6 d: q' ?1 c* [0 ^+ p- c3 M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& ~" }+ u) [8 S! [, e( ?; W<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 d1 {( F6 E$ E- M) i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 `) j0 K" |: i/ G; S) i; u  r<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' n: G9 m# h7 |8 V  \& z# p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) x) d8 n& M2 x3 ]0 Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" c" g8 F/ L% G8 o4 r% W3 W: T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# ?4 I) o- s5 T$ w<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 U" W7 N, D7 }" J* A2 @' n<P>但我不会 </P>
; A# T" T& J3 `" s( C* n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# r- S# B$ E  T. r+ j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& m- x) I, [  X5 a' L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 A3 ?0 |5 q, I% R5 T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& y+ c3 u! H- C( H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 E- b& e: V! w0 X2 h- V7 N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ }5 K5 ]& @. y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 d: N% r6 z& u3 k9 z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* ^* B/ H1 \: e* N) d/ {1 A5 @) `* Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 S3 @2 ^% g4 M' `; k 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 Q! C( v7 [7 ]1 }8 o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 f( }1 p: J6 T( o0 G, Y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>