【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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2 P* O) \8 I7 b, ?0 o1 v$ m我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: O7 \- [. E: o: A& l2 lWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) T. E! O5 J. O& P# XIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 T& M- T7 u* R! s" \) x! WWhy is it so difficult to express?
! o# f% r+ e$ I6 II want to confess that I love you,
- O) D; \( V) ~! }" uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 e* E# Q  U6 L3 b4 i: H& ]3 tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' Q; S0 Z) B* I6 T, k+ e( l( X# b0 lCan I entrust it to you?
6 v# o. l8 T! p# UEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 D5 q% ^" q; `6 Y6 w$ E2 rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' L' S$ l2 M, K; Z& ^2 h9 w. TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" Q2 @! ?" f$ P: m* G4 @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 x; L! L- r! u! d0 z8 q4 yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ d2 `8 ?2 Z0 r( B; m& nEntrust my love within your heart
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# O  }0 h$ j! A$ r9 j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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& p; n# x  c' j7 W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# G& V8 B1 R0 J8 i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 p0 [% i" m' m3 _<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ S2 d2 H% J5 E1 I- r( `5 J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- ~* X  f5 `4 W( g+ P$ M  _0 {& J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) a4 c& d( T1 G& v1 i" v7 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' ]2 h: R; @- t, N: J9 U1 L  P9 a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 j0 F1 ~3 c$ M! N4 ?- [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; l7 x2 R* V; y! F4 ?9 z; v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 k3 [" `" I1 h* k$ C0 N: F: R% Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" A& W2 S! d3 o9 \6 o- Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" ^! ]: I- K( @( I: x, y3 [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ l  a; x& c+ _4 r' H<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, r% e8 n3 u" A0 x% J5 R7 V3 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 ?& b; v% ?% s0 ~/ E; w9 U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: o& a0 o7 a: Y! [0 M# @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 ?! g; \6 i5 g2 b  I. [2 U+ U; \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* c+ D4 O2 `: |; L- T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 l# Q# B7 y  K: {0 X- k6 v3 b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; [! j4 ^+ d6 C& y! z9 ]3 }" u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 Y: ]% c9 e6 ?- y, @0 U  \! V! [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. ^$ h' t0 m( b9 M9 w( ~: f& {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 W! N  S0 Q( k9 M; X4 x! @( T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, n2 v( ^( I. h- y$ x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ W- p2 r  s* [! p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
+ [6 h! j2 B) |+ O! Z7 G4 E4 F5 N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" H8 a0 L7 E1 M/ e0 D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  B6 w' C' w; ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# Y! L+ C( ]1 R( A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. u' T3 m- [6 Y3 o2 b7 @3 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! W* l0 d$ V# B! T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% y" n) h0 m6 j! {$ I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* N/ R6 `) M0 i* x/ p- t" J, U% |<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>